Maybe it’s not too late to tell you
What I’m feeling right now
Because I’ve just figured that out
I’ve been waiting for this time
To arrive so that I’d tell this
To someone I love
Oh, I think I’m rushing right now
Because I’ve done that before
And I know the consequences
Or, should I just say whatever
I’m feeling right now because
I may change my mind later?
I think that I should slow down
Because it’s better to do so
When things get complicated
Things are always complicated
Aren’t they?
“I’m glad that you’re glad that I’m happy.”
Yeah. That makes sense.
I’m not broken down but
I know that something’s
Not right
I think that I’m blank.
I’ve to change that
All by myself and I know that
It takes time
Everything takes time.
I’ve messed things up
But, I’d like to tell you that
My heart still flies for you.
“My heart still flies for you”……. beautiful lines
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I’m glad that you found it beautiful.
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Touching..!! Yes.. my eyes stuck in the last line too.. well done.. 👍🏼😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
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Thank you so much for going through it!
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Wow nice. You made that Drawing ?
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Thank you so much! Yes, I did.
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That’s beautiful.
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Thank you so much, again! I admire your sketches. They’re beautiful too!
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That’s so kind of you. Thank you 🙃
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That’s better 😍
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😛
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I meant beautiful
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Thank you so much! So, this comment of yours is the one I should reply to, right?
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Yeah 😓
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I’m sorry. I was laughing back then. I’m sure that autocorrect was the reason behind all that!
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Yeah it was. I got tensed after I saw what I’ve posted that comment 😐
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Don’t be tensed now! It’s alright. Autocorrects happen every now and then and they’re annoying at times.
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Yeah they are. It happened so many times before too.
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“I’m glad that you’re glad that I am happy..” I liked it.
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Thank you so much for liking it. But, that line isn’t mine! It’s from someone I know. Thanks to them.
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Awww… this is just so beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much! I’m glad that you found it beautiful.
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My pleasure, it definitely was 🙂
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This was intense!
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Thank you so much, Himanshi!
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Flow of conversation with ourselves is great..phenomenally written
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That’s right.
Thank you so much!
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your girlfriend is very lucky
😀 A boyfriend who is a poet
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Oh, she’s a better one. Much, much better. Thank you!
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Expressed with heavy heart..beautiful lines..every lines express how you feel for her..pavan..
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Thank you for appreciating me, Anju! I’m glad that you liked it.
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My support will be there for you always..
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Thank you so much, Anju!
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Love this…These lines are so relatable and pure.
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Thank you so much for loving it!
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My pleasure 😊
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My heart still flies for you💞💓
Beautifully written with beautiful heart ❣
Well done pavan🤗👍🏻
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I’m glad to hear that you liked it. Thank you, Jazz!
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Pleasure is all mine pavan☺️👍🏻
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The last line is so full of true love and affection. Absolutely delighted to read this one 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading it, Neha! I’m so glad to hear that you liked it.
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🙂
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Wowww! This is so beautifully penned. It feels a lot like a ‘Soliloquy’ to me, this is one term I learnt recently in Literature class, haha. So, I thought to show-off. 😛
I like the confusion that you have shown so perfectly in the beginning, how your emotions are like a see-saw, and it’s so difficult to decide whether to confess or not! The last line takes my heart away. ❤ It’s like a six word story, hehe. And you sketch very well, Pavan. Keep going.
-Firefly 🐝
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Oh, hey there Firefly! Thank you so much for going through whatever I’ve written. Oh, I think that it’s too short to call it a soliloquy. I’m glad that you liked it. Yes, we learn everyday and it’s okay to show off!
Thank you so much for appreciating me! You too, keep up the good work. Cheers!
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Haha, okay. I got to learn one more thing then, soliloquy is not very short. 😺 Thankyouu! And thankyou again. Cheers to writing! 🌼
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That’s great! Yeah, cheers to writing!
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Yayyy! 🙆
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Beautifully written, so moving, heartfelt and emotionally intense.
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Thank you so much for taking your time in reading it! I’m glad that you found it that way.
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You are welcome. Yes, loved it!
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Also, I love your drawing. Both arts combine perfectly. Great work!
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Wonderful post.. And beautiful sketch.. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ayesha!
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Intriguing !!
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I’m glad that you liked it, Jyo!
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Well done highlighting the fragility of humanity. Loved this!
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Thank you for loving it. I’m glad that you did.
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🙂
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The turbulence of thoughts, the battle with the voices in head, expressed so beautifully in this ! Such a heartfelt piece, wonderfully done ! 🙂
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Thank you so much for going through it. I had to express what I felt. So, here it is! Oh, thank you!
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It was a pleasure read !
Its always good to express what one feels, and just let it out, and you did it beautifully ! 🙂
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I’m glad that I did! Thank you, again.
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Filled with so much love, and portrayed by words.. U were amazing😍👌
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Yeah, “love” is amazing! Thank you so much for spending your time to read this post on my blog!
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Your words are so beautiful Pavan 😊😊
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Thank you so much, Pia!
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