I could feel your presence around me despite the fact that we live a thousand miles away
Now, I’ll have to question myself for trusting someone who just came out of the blue
Living with whatever you say is all that I can do for I can’t really know what you actually meant
There’s just one way out.
There was a time when every word we exchanged seemed divine
Like a pulchritude unfathomable
I could feel myself become anew, for the efforts I put in;
Were something I never did for anyone else
I felt the urge to reveal my darkest secrets
And there I came, running towards you
I knocked the door, expecting you to unlatch it to the world where I hadn’t been
I was bemused, lost in paradise
You weren’t there for me when I needed you the most.
But there’s so much more I want to say. So much I need the courage to express.
How could I tell you, love, every word you speak is entwined within me
I wish I could play you the melody my heart weaves
But, I constantly find myself not telling you more.
It’s like you’ve been trying to tell me something that I need to know
But there’s something that’s stopping you from doing so and I can feel it
Secrets between ourselves are not going to stand strong as they’ll be out someday and
I’ll just pretend to believe that everything is alright.
At the end, all I do is giving myself to you, piece by piece.
I may not have the fortitude to say everything, but I promise to never stop trying.
Never stop trying to turn these texts into something more;
And turn this everyday conversation to last a lifetime.
– AestheticGraphy and Zero Error
Written in collaboration with Riya. (Thank you so much for writing with me, Riya!) The words that are italicised belong to them and are copyrighted.
Beautifully weaved by you both. Just loved the art work. It is so deep and poignant ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Jaya Singh!
Credits to Riya, from AestheticGraphy.
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Yay💟
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Yeah! Cheers!
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Perhaps she felt everything that you did too. I guess you’ll never know, and she might not either but nothing is truly ever over unless you believe it is. It’s never too late to start again. It’s never to late to make amends, because I believe that nothing or no one is ever to broken to be put together to create something more beautiful than they were before.
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Too* late and too* broken sorry. The perks of autocorrect and writing comments in a rush 😂
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Typos are awesome and I love it! Just chill. It’s okay to commit mistakes.
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Hahaha thanks. I really dislike them but I guess you’re right. It’s okay to make mistakes, as long as they aren’t intended to hurt the other person
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That’s true.
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Yes. I agree, Mvadi!
It’s never too late to start all over again.
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It’s great that you believe that! Positive as always
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It’s good to be positive!
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Agreed
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Beautiful pavan..and riya..
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Thank you so much, witasarmah! I’m glad that you liked reading it.
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I like reading ur post..ur writing is very mature..love the way u shape ur words n direct ur feelings.
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I’m surprised to know that! To be honest, I’m not that matured but I write what I feel. I think that what I write is more matured than what I am.
Thank you so much, again!
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Beautiful piece. ❤️
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Thank you so much!
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Seriously yr…the words and how you both have used them are like beyond words for me…too good..and the way you write is also commendable…just loved it 💖
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Thank you so much! I’m glad that you liked reading it. Credits to Riya. She’s a great writer.
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The collaboration is quite impressive 😊😊
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This is just so intense and hard-hitting and relatable. It’s like someone just narrated the story of my life, haha! Just one person can change everything about your life, they come so unexpectedly, and leave even more unexpectedly, but there footprints do remain forever. I guess, moving on with a smile is the best one can do. 😬
Anyways, I love the way you write, it’s so precise, without any exaggerations, so direct and pure that it gets straight to the reader’s heart. As you say, you write what you feel. And it shows in your work. 🌼 This collaboration is a very appreciable attempt. Cheers to both of you. Please do more of these, I really want to read more. ☺
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Thank you so much, Chandni! I’m flattered. I’m glad that you read all of my posts and I’m grateful too. Yes, I’ll write more. I’ll keep writing, no matter what.
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Naa, I’m not done yet. There are still some posts left, and I’m super excited to read them. It’s like a glance into your soul, hehe! 🙆
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I hope that they don’t waste your time or bore you! Keep reading. Oh, keep writing and inspire us! Have a great weekend.
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Hey, don’t say that. Your posts are seriously very interesting, never ever boring, okay? I love reading them. It’s only that I go speechless when commenting on your work. 😹 And I should be saying that to be honest, I hope my writing doesn’t bore you. Yayyy, you have a great weekend too, Pavan. ☺
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Gorgeous! The imagery is so beautiful! “I wish I could play you the melody my heart weaves”
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Thank you so much for going through the post! Credits to Riya, from AestheticGraphy.
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You are welcome!
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Beautiful post indeed.
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Thank you so much!
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Amazing! Well done bro and riya 🙂
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Thank you so much, Unni!
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How do I write like this?? ☺️☺️Tips please.
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Just write your heart out, ma’am!
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‘I wish I could play you the melody my heart weaves’. 🖤 Beautiful! 🖤
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Thank you so much.
Hello! I’m unable to view your blog. There’s a glitch or something that I don’t know. The link doesn’t open up. I’ve been trying that but the results are negative! Do share the link to your blog so that I can view it. Thank you!
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Hey Pavan! You will be able to view my blog now.
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Okay! I’ll check it out soon.
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Very beautiful
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Thank you so much!
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Your welcome 🙂
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A beautiful collaboration Pavan! Too meaningful and powerful 💜
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Thank you so much, Megha!
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Wonderful collaboration
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure
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Commendable collab! Tremendous job from both of you Pavan and Riya. Collabs are the best way to bring out the best in two writers, complimenting each others writing style. Great work and give us more of these beautiful creations.
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Yes! Thanks to Riya. Thank you so much! I hope so!
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Welcome Pavan….
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Interesting to see two different writers merge their thoughts together to create this wonderful work 🙂 Loved how the flow of words just pulled me through the poem!
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Thank you so much for going through! It was a good experience – to collaborate and the outcome, well, it’s come out good enough, thanks to you guys!
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You’re very welcome, really enjoyed it, hope to see more of your good works 🙂
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U write with so deep feeling…I feel as if I was experiencing the moment ….amazing !!!✌️
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Thank you so much for reading the post! I’m glad that you liked reading the collaboration.
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Wc …thanks for following my blog and helping me to expand my blog.😊😊
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You’re welcome.
Welcome to WordPress!
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More power✨
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Thank you so much for reading the post.
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“At the end, all I do is giving myself to you, piece by piece.” Eloquent, thank you!
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We’re glad that you liked reading the post. Thank you so much!
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Thank you for passing through my blog😊. Also I loved your post!
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You’re welcome. You’re a great artist!
I’m glad that you liked reading the post.
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🤗🤗
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Beautiful💕💕
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Thank you so much!
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Amazing Collab, wonderful share, nice poetry n beautiful artistic sketches, keep blogging, cheers!!!
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Thank you so much for going through the post! You too! Keep blogging.
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You’re most welcome, cheers!
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Captivatingly penned poem
Liked it
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We’re glad that you liked reading this collaboration. Thank you so much!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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This is so relatable, right from the beginning to the end. Great job both of you.
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I’m glad that you found this to be relatable. Thank you so much for reading it.
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Beautiful write-up!
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Thank you so much for reading!
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