I’m probably the only thing on this
Land that’s the least enchanting
And I also know that I won’t be
Able to change a thing
If that’s proved to be the truth
I’m a stone but I’ve got a heart that
Lives deep inside me
I know that I’ll break myself someday
Into tiny bits of unworthy crystals
And submerge underwater
But the river that flows beside me
Tells me that there’s life
Somewhere out there and asks me
To go with it on a journey
That never ends
I don’t want to be carried away for
I refuse to move on
And I choose to stay here for
This is my place where
I’m supposed to be
I still hope that I’d stay strong
On the shore,
Unseen and untouched.
Stay strong Pavan ……
And be of good courage.
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You too, stay strong!
Thank you so much for reading the post.
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Yes, I will.. It was a pleasure to read it Pavan…
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Ahaaan, this is so deeply touching! All I wish to say is just keep the faith and believe the river for once. Get carried away with it and see what happens, haha! Stay strong! ❤
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Thank you so much for going through the post, Chandni!
The advice should help. You too, stay strong.
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Yayyy! Thankyouu, I am the strongest, hehe. 😛
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Sure, you’re the strongest!
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Hahah 🙆🌼
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This is lively, and very touching.
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Thank you so much for going through the post.
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You are very welcome Pavan. I should have typed lovely and not lively in my original comment. Mi often make that stupid mistake with being blind
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Oh, that’s okay. It’s really alright if you commit mistakes. We all make mistakes. There are no stupid mistakes, in general. I’m almost a blind person if I don’t wear glasses or contact lenses. I’m sorry if I sounded harsh.
Thank you.
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Oh gosh, no you did not sound harsh at all. Wow. You have bad eyesight too. I understand. It’s hard. I have really appreciated you reading my poetry. I will read more of yours too. You are a really good poet. Smiles.
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I read your posts every now and then. Your poems are great. I like those poems about fleas! Keep writing.
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Lol. Thankyou Pavan. More fleas are in the wings, waiting!
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Struggles, part of every bit of life yet we keep our faith alive. Someday things might change in a favourable way 👍
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Yes, let’s hope so.
Thank you so much for going through the post!
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Very intense!!
Stay bold and go with the flow.
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Thank you so much for reading the post!
Yeah, I’ll try to make the best out of myself.
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Just go with the flow of that river pavan..it will definitely take you to the beautiful journey..stay blessed☺️🤗🤗
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Thank you so much for reading the post! Yes, I will! Have a great week ahead.
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Same to you☺️🤗
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What a strong message, I feel the persistence 🙂 I like how the photo complemented the message so well 🙂
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Thank you so much for going through the post. I’m glad that I could say what I wanted to say.
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Yes, it definitely speak to me, thanks for sharing your great work with us 🙂
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Amazing 💞
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Thank you so much!
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The first step of the journey is always the hardest……beautiful writing :O) xx
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That’s true.
Thank you so much!
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In this fast forwarded life, we often forget to appreciate where we are.
Beautiful poem! 🙂
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Thank you so much for going through the post! I’m glad that you liked reading it.
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It was my pleasure!
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Nice piece. Flow of words depicting a call on faith and hope. Wishing you the best friend.
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Thank you so much for going through the post and for wishing me!
Wishing you the best too.
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You’re welcome. Thank you.
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I particularly like the line “where I’m supposed to be …”
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Thank you, pvcann! Thank you so much for reading the post!
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You’re very busy
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Well, I’m not sure whether I’m busy or not!
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🙂
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I just love predictive text
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Okay, now stop making fun of me!
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🙂 I like Your humour Pavan
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I’d like to thank you for that!
I’m sorry, my phone went off for a while.
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Silly, it should read – you’re very welcome
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You’re very welcome!
Is this okay now?
I just laughed at myself.
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Yes indeed
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A beautiful write. I am sure you will survive strongly
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Thank you so much for going through the post and for encouraging me!
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Always a pleasure
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This has a sense of hope that I appreciate quite a lot. It’s nice to be hopeful because it makes life worth living.
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Yeah. Being hopeful is necessary as that’s one of the things that can keep us going. Thank you so much for reading the post!
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It takes a great deal of courage to take a step in to the unknown,
This is a beautiful piece keep the faith alive 🌸
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You’re right!
Thank you so much for going through the post.
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You are very welcome 😊
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Excellent site. Exceptional writing.
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Thank you so much for your time and for your compliments!
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Pavan, my pleasure!
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Please don’t ever believe you are “tiny bits of unworthy crystals”! Life does harden us at times but stepping out of our comfort zone can bring us untold happiness too sometimes. May you have the courage to do so, Pavan.
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Thank you so much for stopping by! This comment of yours went unnoticed and I’m really sorry about that. I’m glad that you went through the post. I really appreciate it. Thank you!
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No worries! 🙂
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Quite inspiring
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Thank you so much!
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It’s a deep writing you got there 😊
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Thank you so much for reading!
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It is really a nice read. Extremely well penned
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I’m glad that you liked it, Jaya. Thank you so much!
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The pleasure is mine.
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