I’m like a bunch of idiots
That are brought together
But none of them stick together
Because they’re also the idiots
Who like to wander.
It’s hard to convince me
But I go with the flow.
Guiding me would be of no use
Because I say ‘Yes!’ to whatever
You say.
Try telling stories to a three-year-old.
You’d then understand
What I actually mean.
I didn’t intend to examine you
But I feel like I’m attracted to things
And that’s not my fault.
I’m just a speck of dust
That gets inside one of your eyes.
Well, I’m unable to see it.
Very well written. I love how all your pieces have such a deep meaning ā¤
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Thank you so much for reading my posts here!
I’m so pleased to hear that.
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Brilliant! The words have a depth. Loved that eye. Your art is amazing.
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Thank you! I’m glad that you liked reading the post.
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The pleasure was mine
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And I love the metaphor in it!
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Hey, thank you, B!
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Amazing ā„ļø
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Thank you so much!
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Beautifully penned mate āļø šÆ
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Thank you so much for going through the post, Nirant!
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Pleasure always to read ur words āŗļø
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Brilliantly poem & art work ā£
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Thank you so much for complimenting!
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Beautiful š
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Deep!
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I’m happy to hear that.
Thank you!
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Indeed I liked it!
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Wow… I love the way you arrange ur thoughts in words…. Ohh love that eye too
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Thank you so much for your compliments. I’m glad that you liked reading the post.
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This was wonderful ā¤
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Thank you so much!
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Bravo āļø Brilliant work! Artistic eyes! Great sketch Bro! Lovely poem too! cheers! Have a great day ā
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Thank you so much for the compliments. I’m glad that you liked reading the post.
Yeah! Have a great day!
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My pleasure always Bro! Cheers!
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Amazing poem filled with deep emotions
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Thank you so much for the compliments and going through the post.
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Very moving lines
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Thank you so much!
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š Your Content is Good Pavan. But Idk about your “Casual” Posts š
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Thank you, Jatin. I don’t know anything about the casual posts that I’ve written! Keep reading.
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It’s my first time I’m reading your post. And I really looking forward to reading some more, You can be a Good Writer. Keep it up š
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Very beautiful eyes šššš ā¤ poem is brilliant
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Thank you so much.
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Jaw dropping..! š
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Thank you so much!
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But I feel like I’m attracted to things and it’s just not my fault. Beautiful lines shreyasš
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Thank you so much for reading the post!
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Pavan Athreyas
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I’m sure you are way more than a mere speck of dust.
Beautiful poem! š
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Well, that’s about an actual speck of dust. I had written about it because nobody usally writes about such things. I just wanted to give them some importance by personifying it.
Yeah. Everybody is way more than a mere speck of dust.
Thank you so much for reading the post, Sonali!
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Oh, well that’s a really great way of thinking. It’s nice to know your perspective on this.
Yes, everyone is.
You’re welcome š
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Love the last line. Poignant.
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Thank you so much!
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