I used to dream about you
Whenever I was left out
And that wouldn’t stop until I
Saw you at the place
Where you belong.
I knew that my heart wanted you
Very badly because I’d do anything
In order to keep you within my reach
And unlike many other things
You weren’t easy to be acquired.
I knew that there were many others
That were enticing, just like you
But you were special and
I couldn’t bear it when I saw you
With someone else.
One day, I made up my mind
To sneak out of my house and return
With you by my side
Thinking about the good times
In spite of all the restrictions.
But when I held you within my hands
You slipped and fell onto the ground
Making it impossible for me
To pick you up or to buy another one
That looks exactly like you.
OMG! Is it a Lollipop? 😔 I’m heartbroken now, this touched me very deep.
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I think so! But it broke my heart back then. I had to let it go anyway as I hoped that I’d get another one.
Thank you so much for reading!
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True, I can very well understand that feeling. The same can apply to so many things in life. We lose things, and then we have to let go and move on in the hope to find something like that some other day. 😄
And, it’s a pleasure reading your work, Pavan. And also, I love the simplicity in your drawings, they convey the right emotion with utter perfection. Keep going! 💙
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I agree!
I can’t thank you more for reading my posts. You’ve been very supportive.
It’s Zero Error’s first anniversary here, on WordPress.
I’ll see where this goes.
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Oh my God, first Anniversary!! This makes me very happpy. Congratulations Pavan! 🤗 You should celebrate naa. It’s a very special day for you and your blog. If I were you, I’d have thrown a party or something. 😹
You know, I’d really like to read a post about your journey so far. 😬 Please write a blog about it, how to started the blog, and what are your favourite poems on your blog, how was your experience and everything else. I’d love to read.
And congratulations again on this amazing milestone. ♥👦
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I really thought about celebrating it but I was unable to write a post since last week. I will surely write about all of that very soon.
Thank you!
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Yayyyy, I’ll be waiting to read it then. And have a great Anniversary celebration. Do buy lollipops, haha. 🤗
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😊
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Thank you so much for stopping by.
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😂 didn’t expect that! Nice work 👍
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I hope it was suspenseful.
Thank you!
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Defiantly! Waiting for the next one…
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Oops! I better write well. See you soon!
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This is so well written!!❤
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Thank you so much, Riya!
I’m glad that you liked reading the post.
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This was so good! Particularly the surprising lollipop at the end 😁
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I’m glad that you liked reading the post! It’s a relief for me to hear that the surprise worked.
Thank you!
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That’s such a charming tale :O) x
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Thank you so much!
I’m glad that you liked it.
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Such a lovely write. I know how it feels when your lollipop or ice-cream just falls 🤧🤧
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It’s a pain in the heart! Let’s be careful when we have it in our hands and finish it as soon as possible for it may bite the dust.
Thank you so much for stopping by.
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Very true. Thank you so much for these wise words. I will surely follow it. Always a pleasure to read your work and see you art.
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Likewise!
I like your art as well.
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Thank you 🙃☺️
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Is it really lollipop or? You have written it very well, whatever u write comes from ur heart that u have experienced…
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It’s about all those things that I’ve lost and not just about a lollipop.
Thank you so much, man. I’m glad that you liked reading this post.
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What is ur least count o zero error Mr. Pavan?… U r write with ur heart not the brain, it is great to do so👍… The twist was nice 😉
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Well, the value is on the homepage of my blog. Please, do visit!
I’m really glad to hear such words. I feel great! Thank you so much, Mr. ..
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The imaginary perfection is always perfect.. What r u doing bt? U r somewhere related to science field…
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You guessed it right. I’m studying science at college. I study physics, electronics and mathematics.
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One last question where r u frm?
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I’m from Bengaluru (Bangalore).
Okay, I’ll try to be formal now.
Do return the favour! I guess it’s cool.
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Ohh Nice to read that u r frm bangalore… I’m a rcb fan and my fav player is Abd…
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I actually meant to ask you about sharing your details, such as the place you live in.
Good to read that you’re a fan of RCB and AB. Awesome!
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I understood that return favor thing bt I’m trying to flatter u first 😉 by being informal…
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Cool. Cool. I get it! Okay.
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I think u have read most of my Posts, I have indirectly written that I’m frm Mumbai in the terror attack one… Have u read it or not?
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I think so. I’ve read some of your picture quotes and movie reviews.
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Read my How to get more readers on your WordPress blog?… U will understand something about me… I like ur writings they r very good with uniqueness ND ur catchy titles also…
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Sure. I’ll read that as soon as possible. Thank you so much!
It was good talking to you.
Have a great weekend!
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Check your spam!
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I loved the twist
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I’m glad that you loved it. Thank you so much!
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Clever. And enjoyable. You could have aligned your words with many an image. Well done.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation towards the post, Mr. Eric! I’m so glad to hear from you.
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You are deservingly welcome. And it’s Eric, not Mr. Eric. 😉
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Wow! Okay, Eric.
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🤣🤣🤣 Ah!! The importance of getting a lollipop. Those were the days, when lollipop caused heartbreak.
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Yeah, it surely was heartbreaking.
Good old times!
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So so sweet and beautiful dear Pavan 😊
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Thank you so much, Krishna!
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Omg lollipop !! But beautifully flow of emotions 👍😊
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Thank you so much for the compliments, Jyo!
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*beautiful
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Nice one.<3
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.<3
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You write so well! And your stories and poems have an ‘Olivet Twist’ with them!
With love
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Thank you so much!
I think you meant “Oliver Twist”. Typos happen and I’m sorry for pointing it out!
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My bad😅 the r and t got mixed up! Sure I meant him😊
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I was just trying to be funny. That’s alright.
Thank you!
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Haha😄
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Btw please do check out my blog😉
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Yes. I will. I was caught up with something else back then. I’ll read them as soon as possible.
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Thank you Nice talking with you!
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interesting take on everyday moments…
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Thank you so much!
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Most welcome…
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Aah 🍭 Lollipop. It hurts. Always your favourite things would fall down just before it enters your mouth😂.
Maybe its because of the greed to it.
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I think you’re right.
Also, the lollipop must be sour!
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I have nominated you for a silly Sunshine blogger award.
Please go check my latest post for the info. How much do you rate me on a scale of 1 to 10? I have asked this question there but I want the answer now. Be truthful.
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Oh, cool.
I’ve just checked your post.
I don’t know you. (Other than blogging). So, it isn’t fair to give you a false rating. I’d simply give you a ten, just like other people! Okay, that’s enough. Have a great weekend.
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Give a rating based on our conversation, 10 is too high for I still need improvement. You have written great posts so I wanted ur feedback on me 😂. U too have a great weekend bt nxt week is also whole weekend fr me due to holidays fr me 😁
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More power to your work
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I thought it was a girl until i saw that lollipop
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Interesting! I think that the ending was surprising enough.
Thank you so much for going through the post.
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Beautifully expressed… Am zapped
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I’m glad that you liked reading it.
Thank you for the compliments.
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